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    Default Four Beasts.

    Demons have many forms:

    Beast I Cain.

    He wasn't Abel, now with stench of demonic motivation.
    A 50-50 choice. Slick and known for patience.
    Heads, four. Faces of man. Tongue a double edge-sword.
    Body of a lion, Lies sweeping effortlessly through it's depths-core.
    bottom is a crimson tail. Swims Half way out of the water.
    Signaling Judas to go down with a slaughter...

    IIJudas.

    A disciple of Christ in previous times,
    once a Guardian until devious lies.
    It's abominable stench was of human decomposition.
    True to it. An inverted crucifix hanging useless for opposition.
    Hangin' by the rope, Suicide extinguished.
    Do or die delinquent. Demons cackling teeth as souls are relinquished...

    Beast III Legion.

    One of numerous, the grandest of insanity.
    Escapes from brimstone to earth standing with reality.
    pitchfork on your shoulder, exorcisms of mid-evil times.
    With steeples chimed. the end of the "sold of souls" you'll hear His people cry, emotionless tears with weeping eyes...

    Beast IV: Lilith.

    A Long time night terror strolling through the garden of Eden.
    Sparring with Legion. Plucked wings, a 2-headed gaurd of the demons.
    Obscenities a regularly basis is part of their language.
    Unvanquished, the hostility was ageless. no decease to the anguish.
    Razor tipped talons of a succubus, talents of witchcraft.
    Good versus evil, the balance is miss matched...

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    Default Re: Four Beasts.

    Upping fellaz!

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    KMC you are a Genius at Work. Highly Inspirational. Stay Aggressive. You just Taught me a great deal. Thanks. AR

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    Highly appreciated. thanks for the comments.

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    Default Re: Four Beasts.

    Uppin'

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    complete shit, lol, jk, pretty dope, as always
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    Uppin'

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    Default Re: Four Beasts.

    Like the biblical referencing and the rhyming scheme was on point, had some good imagery at least for me when you bring Legion into it I imagined the demonic force creeping up from hell. My mind automatically went to swine running off of a cliff when I read it, somehow picturing a crowd of peasants chasing the demons with pitchforks had that in my head. Anyways it's a good piece brother and it flows well everything is on point as usual. Good going brother hope to see some more coming.

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